Icon Re: RE: Lyric of the Weak, literally
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Eugene (view)

OK..here's another..now go on ...critique, do whatever...I lie NAKED (ouch).  Now..bear in mind, this passage was Totally free-form.  It is set to noise guitar passages with percussion,and very eerie sounding.  The thought process behind it however (and maybe Robert or Dan can understand), an industrial, perhaps electricity generating plant adjacent to the C and O canal path in Williamsport, Maryland..that portends a distinct "feel".  

ELECTRIC PLANTWARNING: Image embedded by poster.

 

The only thing that

They saw when they looked

At the wet leaves

On the ground,

Before them,

Was the myriad of colours,

Reflected in the sky,

Above.

That’s when they came to the

Electric Plant,

With it’s Force Fields,

And Magnetic Polarization.

"Are we undone yet?",

She asked,

"No", was the casual reply,

And they looked off into the distance.

If ever you heard the songbird,

In the morning,

It was the sweetest of melodies,

And you would let yourself drift,

Into the sky,

For another look,

Before the Journey.

 

Eugene Benjamin, 06/15/03


whatever...

Gene

P.S. "Thanks..you've been wonderful..try the Veal". 

 

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