Re: "sensory descriptions - how things felt, tasted, looked and so on"
messybear
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Kat, For two weeks (give or take) I've been trying to express SOMETHING about these human-feminine journal pages. At first I tried to write 2 lines of verse for every paragraph. It didn't reach the proverbial beach (IMO) so I scrapped that idea (copped-out perhaps is more like it unfortunately).
I felt like a slightly better person for havin read them; the honesty under fire, the spatial-spiritual strafings taken internally before communicated freely outwardly givingly. I’d resolved to just havin had read em & that’s that. But YOU [here] so eloquently said ..prettymuch what I’d tried to express; definitively. Cool. Thanx.
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intellectually masturbatin while the radio was playin
intellectually masturbatin while the radio was playin
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messybear
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Kat, For two weeks (give or take) I've been trying to express SOMETHING about these human-feminine journal pages. At first I tried to write 2 lines of verse for every paragraph. It didn't reach the proverbial beach (IMO) so I scrapped that idea (copped-out perhaps is more like it unfortunately).
I felt like a slightly better person for havin read them; the honesty under fire, the spatial-spiritual strafings taken internally before communicated freely outwardly givingly. I’d resolved to just havin had read em & that’s that. But YOU [here] so eloquently said ..prettymuch what I’d tried to express; definitively. Cool. Thanx.
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intellectually masturbatin while the radio was playin
intellectually masturbatin while the radio was playin
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