Thanks for your kindness. I’ve been told by others as well that it takes a second thought or a third read to get the gist of my verse/prose. That’s kind of the exercise, really. To paint with broad strokes of colorful notions.... I’ve found that more can be said in a group of sentences by speaking in metaphor or simile or the occasional run-on
sentence & broad use of artistic license,
...&, therein, one gets the added bonus of music.
But then on the flipside.
Jack Nicholson’s character, Melvin Udall in As Good as it Gets, said something to the effect of: “People who speak in metaphors should clean my shorts....”
...so I suppose just as many think I’m an azz, for the way I write, as dig it.
A friend turned me on to Ralph Waldo Emerson’s essay, The American Scholar. If that isn’t an example of painting with notions, I don’t know what is. I know people who wouldn’t bother to read it, even under duress, but it is well worth the read ~~
even a revisit; ...don’t mind if I do.
...stay gold....
